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OVERTURE by XtasiK OVERTURE by XtasiK
adobe illustrator and a VERY small photoshop postwork.

this is me working on my compos in order to get better.

you know?

sometimes i feel that it doesn't matter how hard i try, i just can't get myself satisfied enough with my outcomes :(

inspired by this masterpiece: www.youtube.com/watch?v=VbxgYl…
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:iconhis-sleepless-dreams:
First of all, let me say I am impressed. I have just recently gotten started with Illustrator/Vector art and I am far away from your technical skill! I really love your clear and minimalistic lines while your use of gradients add depth to the image. However, since you wrote that you wanted to work on your composition skills, here are my impressions on that regard:

1) The stroke around the raised fist is too heavy in comparison to the other line-art. The fist is already dominating the mid section of the image and the heavy stroke alienate it from the rest of the (great) symbolism.

2) The bottom half of the image is quite empty- a bigger helicopter and zeppelin, both positioned at the same heigth could make up for that - and, maybe, drawing them from the same angle would further help to immerse the viewer into the artwork?

3) The grey borders disrupt my flow of view. Extending the structure into the background faces might have been the more elegant solution?

Anyway, I still really like this image - the hidden symbolism is a nice but perfect complementation to the perfectly matched soviet style! Thumbs up!
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:icongabypopper:
gabypopper Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
please never stop drawing, it is perfect. You really should be proud of it! :)
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XtasiK Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
muchas gracias, qué linda ^^

saludos! :peace:
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:iconinsanekaffeine:
insaneKaffeine Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
se nota la mejoria en muchas cosas bro, me gusta mucho el toque que has dado con algunos gradients y highlights!!
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XtasiK Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
gracias por las amables palabras, en realidad deseo poder mejorar, prometo que lo próximo que saque sea mucho mejor ;)

por cierto, llevo semanas intentando poder comunicarme contigo, ya no me quieres verdad? :(
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argaelie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013   Digital Artist
Bien bonis, favo C:!
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:iconxtasik:
XtasiK Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
<333
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:iconr3volver1:
R3volver1 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Buenisimo! como te fue? 
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:iconxtasik:
XtasiK Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
si no sale el logo, es porque es obvio betito xD

gracias por tu fav y las porras de cualquier modo ;)
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:iconr3volver1:
R3volver1 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Pensé que no iba porque era para app apenas, pero bueno, ellos se lo pierden, igual esta excelente! :D
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XtasiK Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
no se pierden tanto xD

gracias betún
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